“Are the novel Gods punishing me because I left a bad review?!”
Shen Ziqiao woke up from her deep slumber to find herself transmigrated as the character of an ancient novel. To make matters even worse, she was written by the author to be the moronic daughter of the villain, merely a walking cannon fodder.
Yet it doesn’t end there; she has to strive against a reincarnated female lead’s revenge! And especially against the major death flag in the plot: getting married to the capital’s fool.
But why does she find this fool’s eyes to be too cunning?



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The romance isn't the primary focus until the end, which I find refreshing. It's enjoyable to see her journey from being isolated to forming alliances, with characters gradually warming up to her. However, the main character's tsundere moments can be cringe-worthy at times.
In terms of the male lead, he isn't portrayed as a typical black-hearted character. Initially, he comes across as naive in matters of romance, but it adds a touch of cuteness. Though his character can feel clichéd, his background feels believable, including his ruse about his illness. The part where he allows his half-brother to seduce a girl instead is a sour note, but it eventually resolves positively. There are some plot holes, like the unexplained theft in the MC's carriage, and the story doesn't delve deeply into palace politics or warfare.
The villains, particularly the original female lead, are frustrating due to their nastiness, promiscuity, and arrogance. Some supporting characters are underdeveloped, but a few do show growth. The older villains, such as the MC's grandmother and mother-in-law, serve as a driving force for the MC's growth, even if they're one-dimensional.
Overall, this story suits my preference for non-overpowered protagonists. Other similar novels I enjoy are "The Job of An Imperial Concubine" and "Counterattack of the Cannon Fodder Chambermaid," which offer slower-paced historical tales with relatable characters overcoming societal constraints.
The character development, however, feels minimal. The protagonist mainly focuses on managing her business, which limits her growth. Having skimmed through the first 86 chapters, where the action was mostly confined to backyard fights, I eventually lost interest and jumped ahead to around chapter 140, where the marriage plot unfolded and concluded the book. If you share my impatience, you might find yourself skipping similar sections, particularly during the early chapters.
FL's behavior doesn't reflect a mature woman trapped in a teenager's body; it remains similar to her original self. It appears as if her intellect didn't change along with her physical appearance. Her actions throughout the story are hard to justify, especially since she seems to lack clear motivation for most of her decisions.
The relationship dynamics between ML's younger brother and his consort seem to hint at a potential love interest, but there's no solid development or resolution in this regard.
In summary, the ending is a disappointment, with too much condensed into a single chapter, feeling forced and contrived. Despite its good translation, the story as a whole is destined for the trash bin. Thank you to the translator for their efforts, though.
The climax, though, felt a bit unnecessary with the introduction of a new villainess, causing the main antagonist to fade into the background. The ending seemed rushed, with some key moments needing more development to provide a satisfying conclusion. Despite these minor drawbacks, I found the story engaging enough to stay up until 2 AM to finish it and even write this review. Overall, it was a solid read that kept me hooked.
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